Tuesday, May 28, 2013


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Jacob led Pelu back through a part of the city near Brownburgh and Pelu noted with pride that he recognized the area from when they had traveled through it earlier. He could still get lost in the city if he lost track of Jacob but it was a small first step in learning his way around the metropolis. He began looking around as he tried to get his orientation and find which path would lead him back to Dima's house. He didn't look for long, however, because he quickly ran into Jacob who had stopped in front of a storefront and was turning to talk to him. "Sorry," Pelu sputtered. "I was trying to figure out which way it is to your house from here. I recognize this neighborhood." "Well," Jacob replied, "let's see how well you've been paying attention. Which way do you think it is?"

Pelu turned in circles as he surveyed his surroundings. There was a sign over there that he remembered being on his left as they passed it earlier. That meant that they must have come from further down that way, but not much further because they had just turned before they passed the sign. "There" Pelu said as he pointed toward a street. "We came down that road, so if I go up it and turn left I'll get back." "you're learning fast" Jacob said. "It won't be long before you can find your way around better than I can. Here's another place for you to remember. This is where Dima works. If you get in trouble you'll be able to find her here most days. She washes laundry for people who don't have the time for it. Or people who have extra money. They have carts up in some of the richer neighborhoods where they collect laundry and bring it back here to wash it."

Pelu immediately felt the heat and humidity as they stepped into the launderer's. They entered a small front room with only a desk and two doors. Jacob greeted the young woman behind the desk and continued on through the door that led further in. As Pelu followed through the second door, the heat and humidity increased to a point where Pelu wondered how anyone could endure it for more than a few minutes. The room had several low stone stoves that were heating enormous vats of water. Women bent over the vats and stirred the contents with paddles, occasionally pulling out wet laundry and placing it on nearby carts or pulling laundry from other piles to drop it into the boiling water. Other women pushed the carts from pot to pot or through a door in the back that Pelu couldn't see through. He followed Jacob as they wove between the pots to reach one near the back.

"Lunch time" Jacob said as he walked up to the woman stirring the vat. She pulled the wet clothing from her cauldron and straitened up. Pelu hardly recognized Dima as she turned to greet them. She was covered in moisture that made her hair and clothing stick to her body. He couldn't tell if it was perspiration or the moisture that had boiled out of the pots. Her hair was tied back with a lace except for a few strands that were plastered to her forehead. She smiled when she saw Pelu there and he thought that even in such a dismal place, and looking the way she did, that smile made him feel welcome and comfortable. Like all the problems he was facing would work out and there was nothing to worry about.

Sunday, May 19, 2013


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"Here we are" Jacob announced as they stopped in front of a shop that Pelu though looked just like all the others. "I just need to give this package to Mr. Proctor. After that we need to bring Dima her lunch and then we can go see the center of the city."

As they stepped into the shop Pelu immediately noticed an odor that he was unfamiliar with. It filled the air of the small shop. "Hello Jacob" the man behind the counter called.
"Good morning Mr. Proctor. I have a package for you from Ben Miter."
"Oh, wonderful! That must be more of those herbs he grows. They make the best cough medicine I've ever found. Is this a friend of yours?"
"Yes sir," Jacob replied. "This is Pelu. He's new to the city so he's staying with us for a while."


Pelu could feel the gaze of the older gentleman as it was fixed upon him. "You've managed to find friends in this city. You'll soon find that is not an easy thing to accomplish, nor something that should be taken for granted." He then pulled a small pouch from behind the counter and handed it to Jacob. "Help yourself to any of the baked goods. You too Pelu. My wife makes them but it isn't what people come to an apothecary for so they don't sell very well."

Pelu thanked him and grabbed a small loaf covered with nuts. He felt uncomfortable accepting the generous offer but didn't want to insult the shopkeeper by refusing it. Jacob didn't didn't seem to share Pelu's trepidation. He grabbed several of the small loafs and stuffed them into his satchel.

Wednesday, May 8, 2013


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After they had emerged back into clear streets Jacob pulled an apple from the satchel that hung at his side and tossed it to Pelu. He began speaking as they walked through the labyrinthine streets of the capitol.

"The city is ruled by the royals but the priests and inventors hold a lot of power as well. Even though the royal family makes the laws, a lot of people won't follow those laws if the priests don't agree with them. That means the priests have a lot of power. The temple at the center of the city is filled with priests and acolytes, and I've heard that it's connected to the palace by tunnels so the priests can keep track of what's happening in the palace. The royals almost always consult them, so the temple has a lot of power."

"The temple is mostly closed off to the public. There's a shrine room that you can go into to make offerings but the rest is closed off. Some of the nobles can get further in and the royal family can go all the way to the chamber of the high priest, but they say that even the royal family has access to only a small portion of the temple. The rest is a mystery that can only be known be those who have dedicated themselves fully to the order. The acolytes are like priests in training. They have to leave everything behind. They live in the temple and only leave on holy business. Whatever that may be."

"The inventors don't get along with the holy order. There's been a small feud between them longer than my parents can remember. They think that our problems can be solved through inventions and making our world better. The priests say that we need to solve our problems through devotion to the gods and rely on them to make our world better. They disapprove of many of the inventions that come out of the guild and have been trying to convince the royal family to dissolve the guild entirely. The royal family has a whole kingdom to rule, but they spend most of their time trying to keep the balance between the inventors and the holy order."

"How do you know all this?" Pelu asked. "I spend a lot of time on the streets" Jacob replied. "I talk to a lot of people so I know just about everything that happens in this city."

Saturday, May 4, 2013


It's been too long since I updated this and I apologize to any regular readers for that. If you are new to this blog I suggest you go back to the oldest post and work your way forward. On with the story:



Pelu sat in the dirty back alley, protected from the pressing crowd by a vendor's cart. Under the bottom of it he could see the constant motion of legs as people passed by the cart. Occasionally, a pair of legs would stop and he could see a face as someone talked to the vendor and haggled over the price of produce. He watched as nine different faces appeared, hovered for a while, and disappeared again. As Pelu kept waiting for Jacob to return he began to think of the home he had left. The people there would never believe that a place like this bazaar even existed. They valued their open spaces and freedom to move around more than they valued life. Pelu had always thought he was different than the people he had grown up with but he realized that just growing up with them had instilled him with many of the same values.

Pelu's reverie was broken by the sound of footsteps in the side alley. He looked up expectantly and was relieved to see Jacob's face looking back down at him. Jacob now held a brown parcel under one arm and was eating an apple with the other hand. As he finished the apple, he tossed the core over Pelu's head and into the pile of filth that sat behind him. "Ready to go?" he asked. Pelu slowly climbed to his feet and set his most determined look on his face. "Yes", he replied, "just don't go so fast this time." "Don't worry" Jacob said. "I'll lead you through it this time." With that, Jacob grabbed Pelu's arm and slowly led him back into the crowd of people.